"Смотрите! - воскликнул он и даже привстал.- Вот мой город"! Поезд шел очень медленно, и я имел возможность хорошо рассмотреть маленькие хорошенькие домики, окруженные зелеными садами.
"А вот фабрика,- тихо сказал мой спутник. Вы помните, я Вам рассказывал про нее? Вы обратили внимание на трубу? Высокая, правда"? Труба и в самом деле была необыкновенно высокой для такой маленькой фабрики.
"Хотите я расскажу Вам одну историю, связанную с этой трубой? До остановки еще далеко. Я успею". И прежде чем я мог ответить, он начал: "Было это полтора года назад седьмого ноября. Это - годовщина вашей революции, но ее отмечают во всем мире, даже в нашей стране... В тот день с утра на фабрике никто не работал. Во дворе стояла толпа людей, и все смотрели вверх, на фабричную трубу. Примерно на высоте 20 метров от земли к трубе был прикреплен красный флаг.
В ноябре в этих местах не жарко - дожди, ветры. И в тот день небо было темное, шел дождь.
"Look!" he exclaimed and even half-rose. "Here`s my town!" The train was crawling at a snail`s pace, and I had an
opportunity to take a good look at small nice houses surrounded by green gardens.
"And here`s the factory over there," my fellow traveler said in a low voice. Do you remember I`ve told you about it? Have you payed attention to a factory chimney? It`s lofty, isn`t it?" Indeed, the chimney was unusually high for such a little factory.
"Do you want me to to tell you a story related to this chimney? It`s quite far to the station. I`ve enough time." And before my being able to answer, he began: "It happened on the seventh of November. It`s an anniversary of your revolution, but it`s celebrated all over the world, even in our country... In the morning of that day nobody was working at the factory. People
were crowding outside and looking upward, at the factory chimney. A red flag was attached to it at a height of about twenty meters.
It isn`t hot in this area in November: drizzle, wind. And on that day the sky was dark, it was raining.
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Правильный ли перевод с русского на английский? Какие ошибки? (Разговор с неизвестным ч2)
"Look!" he exclaimed and even half-rose. "Here`s my town!" The train was crawling at a snail`s pace, and I had an opportunity to take a good look at nice little houses surrounded by green gardens.
"And there`s the factory over there," my fellow traveler said in a low voice/softly. Remember I`ve told you about it? Have you paid attention to/Did you see(notice) the factory smoke stack? (It`s) lofty, isn`t it?" Indeed, the stack was unusually high for such a small factory.
"(Do you) want me to to tell you a/the story about it/related to this chimney? It`s quite far/a long way to go to the station. I`ve enough time." And before my being able to answer/I could answer, he began: "It happened on the seventh of November. It`s an anniversary of your revolution, but it`s celebrated all over the world, even in our country...On the morning of that day nobody was working at the factory. People
crowded outside looking up at the factory smoke stack. A red flag was attached to it at a/the height of about twenty meters(at about 20m above the ground there was a red flag hoisted up).
It isn`t hot/cold, rainy and windy in this area in November (or: with rains falling and winds blowing). On that day, too, the sky was dark, it was raining.
"And there`s the factory over there," my fellow traveler said in a low voice/softly. Remember I`ve told you about it? Have you paid attention to/Did you see(notice) the factory smoke stack? (It`s) lofty, isn`t it?" Indeed, the stack was unusually high for such a small factory.
"(Do you) want me to to tell you a/the story about it/related to this chimney? It`s quite far/a long way to go to the station. I`ve enough time." And before my being able to answer/I could answer, he began: "It happened on the seventh of November. It`s an anniversary of your revolution, but it`s celebrated all over the world, even in our country...On the morning of that day nobody was working at the factory. People
crowded outside looking up at the factory smoke stack. A red flag was attached to it at a/the height of about twenty meters(at about 20m above the ground there was a red flag hoisted up).
It isn`t hot/cold, rainy and windy in this area in November (or: with rains falling and winds blowing). On that day, too, the sky was dark, it was raining.
Мне понравилось.. . Только не нашел уточнения про "полтора года назад" в соответствующей английской фразе. И я бы заменил "In the morning of that day " на "That day morning"....
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