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Правильный перевод с русского на английский? Если есть ошибки, исправте пожалуйста....

1. -Разрешите представить вам господина Панкова. -Здравствуйте господин Стоун. - Здравствуйте господин Панков. - Господин Панков прибыл сюда на прошлой недели. 2. – Не могли бы вы представить меня некоторым из ваших коллег. - С удовольствием. Когда мы бы могли встретиться с вами? Свободны ли вы завтра утром от десяти до одиннадцати? - Да, я свободен. Это время меня вполне устраивает. - Благодарю вас. - До свидания. - До свидания. 6. - Звонили ли вы мне вчера? - Да, я звонил вам три раза, но телефон не отвечал. - Простите, я ездил навестить своего отца. Он болен сейчас. 1. -Could me introduce you to Mr. Pankov. -Hello, Mr. Stone. (How do you do Mr. Stone) - Hello, Mr. Pankov. (How do you do Mr. Pankov) - Mr. Pankov arrived here last week. 2. - Could you provide me some of your colleagues. - With pleasure. When could we meet with you? Are you free in the morning from ten to eleven? - Yes, I am free. This time, I was quite satisfied. - Thank you. " - Goodbye. - Goodbye. 6. - Call if you see me yesterday? - Yes, I called you three times, but the phone is not answered. - Excuse me, I went to visit his father's. He is illing now.
1. -Could me introduce you to Mr. Pankov. - LET me introduce MR. Pankov TO you.
-Hello, Mr. Stone. (How do you do Mr. Stone)
- Hello, Mr. Pankov. (How do you do Mr. Pankov)
- Mr. Pankov arrived here last week.
Всё остальное здесь ОК - наставили пятёрок Светлане за - have arrived - а нужно кол ставить: не может настоящее время (PRESENT Perfect) употребляться с показателем прошедшего времени - last week!!!

2. - Could you provide me some of your colleagues. - Could you introduce me to some of your colleagues?
- With pleasure. When could we meet with you? Are you free TOMORROW morning from ten to eleven?
- Yes, I am free. This time (= It ) suits me perfectly well.
- Thank you.
- Goodbye.
- Goodbye.
6. - Call if you see me yesterday? - DID you call me yesterday? (Опять забываете про вспомогательный глагол в Past Simple)
- Yes, (I did). I called you three times, but the phone DID not (DIDN'T ) ANSWER.
- Excuse me (=SORRY), I went to visit (=SEE) MY FATHER. He is ILL now.
Диляра Гайнанова
Диляра Гайнанова
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Could I !!!(not me) introduce to you....
Руслан Бречко
Руслан Бречко
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С некоторыми изменениями.
1
- [Mr Stone], аllow me to introduce mr. Pankov.
- How do you do, Mr. Stone.
- How do you do, Mr. Pankov.
- Mr. Pankov arrived here last week.
2
1) Would you mind introducing me to some of your colleagues?
2)
-With pleasure. When can we arrange a meeting? Are you free to meet with me(us) from 10 to 11 a.m tomorrow morning? - иначе звучит немного неприлично, имхо.
- I am. This time suits me well.
- Thank you.
- Good bye.
- Good bye.
6.
- Did you call me yesterday?
- Yes, I did. I called you three times, but you didn't answer. (валить на телефон не по-английски)
- Sorry, I was away visiting my father. He's been ill lately.= болеет и сейчас
(=Л@п() 4Ка
(=Л@п() 4Ка
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Could NOT you provide me some of your colleagues. ПРОПУСТИЛИ
Are you free from ten to eleven IN THE MORNING? В КОНЦЕ

по-моему есть еще куча ошибок, но указывать на них не решусь, потому что сама много не помню...
1. Let me introduce you Mr Pankov.
Mr Pankov have arrived here last week.
2. Could you introduce me to some of your collegues, please?
Your pleasure. When could we meet? Are you free from ten to eleven tomorrow in the morning?
Yes, I am. It quite suits me.
6. Did you call me yesterday?
Yes, I called you three times, but the phone did not answer.
I am sorry. I went to visit my father. He is ill now.
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